Comments on: I own the moon (new poem)

Comments on: I own the moon (new poem) http://www.tinkerx.com/2007/03/21/i-own-the-moon-new-poem/ Creative flux for our heap of broken images. Sun, 14 Mar 2010 22:16:36 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 By: Jen http://www.tinkerx.com/2007/03/21/i-own-the-moon-new-poem/#comment-11561 Jen Sat, 24 Mar 2007 20:22:12 +0000 http://www.tinkerx.com/index.php/2007/03/21/i-own-the-moon-new-poem/#comment-11561 Oh, I really like this. Reminds me quite a lot of an old 50's musical. Yeah, I could picture Frank Sinatra singing this. I can even see it as a prelude to a much bigger number. Great cadence, lovely near-rhymes -- they ice this cake. Great work. Oh, I really like this.

Reminds me quite a lot of an old 50’s musical. Yeah, I could picture Frank Sinatra singing this. I can even see it as a prelude to a much bigger number.

Great cadence, lovely near-rhymes — they ice this cake. Great work.

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